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GCPD: Explosions at HQ
1999/01/17
  
                [...Loren <yu214952@yorku.ca> begins...]

Loren: It's thanks to Renee that I survived Vari's attack. Ari's uncle
       just didn't get enough time. I'm not mad at him, or anything;
       I know he's just protecting Ari, like I'm trying to do.

Chris: You're a fine cop, partner.

Loren: No, no, I'm not...

Wayne: Yeah, Chris, he's definitely *not*! ;)

Renee: Shut your hole, Hotu!

Wayne: Getting defensive, Montoya? You got the hots for the wimp over
       there, huh...? You must be really desperate. :)

Renee: You son of a... -- !

Bullock: Now that was outta line, Hotu. Nobody talks about my partner
         like that and --

Sarah: Actually, Sergeant Bullock, she's no longer your partner.

Bullock: WHAT?!?

Sarah: She requested a different division, and since Chris hasn't been
       keeping up with the heavy workload in Special Investigations,
       I'm moving him to Major Crimes, as your partner. Montoya's with
       Loren now.

    You should see the look on Bullock's face right now. And the rest
of the GCPD crew's.

Bullock: Renee...

    Montoya doesn't look at him, but instead, she hurriedly runs out of
the room, and starts sobbing. Loren starts to go after her, but...

Bullock: Oh no you don't, buddy...!

    Bullock stops him, and socks him square in the face. It's the third
time Loren's been knocked down in as many days. He doesn't look happy
at all.

Loren: That's IT!! I've had enough o'this crap!!

    Loren jumps at Bullock, and the two grown men start fighting like
kids in a schoolyard (*without* using guns or knives). It takes Hardback,
Pettit, and Foley to stop Bullock, while Soong, Essen, Salucci, Kitch,
and Chris restrict the rage-filled Loren.

Bullock: Let go a'me!! I don't wanna see that punk's face. I'm gettin'
         outta here!

    Bullock tears away from the scene, and Loren starts to calm down.
The others release him, and Loren and his now former police partner
move a little away to talk.

Chris: What got into you, partner? Oh yeah, I guess we're not partners
       anymore...

Loren: Hey, I didn't expect that, myself.

Chris: So, Renee really does have feelings for you, huh?

Loren: Yeah, I guess so.

Chris: So?

Loren: So what?

Chris: How do *you* feel?

Loren: ...pretty damn beat, if you ask me. I think my arm's broken.

     Chris knows that Loren doesn't want to talk about it right now,
so he decides to let him sort it all out.


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